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hammyhamfist (

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Tayside

Posted: Mon 08 Sep 2008 2:47
New choon just finished an accoustic/electric number called walking through the snow and bogeyman rebuilt from scratch. Vocs coming soon as the services of a singer have been secured, Hurragh !!! Enjoy
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Gilmour1978 (

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Posted: Tue 09 Sep 2008 23:09

Hey, hey! Excellent stuff El Hamstero!

Beginning reminded me a little of a fantastic song called 'When It All Comes Down' By The Icicle Works.

Can't fault this tune. Just needs some real quality vox on it and you got yerself a first calss track!

Good Un!
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stevestory (

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Posted: Thu 11 Sep 2008 14:27
Intro sounds to me like it should be 15 secs. Chorus or pre-chorus should come in to my mind at approx 40 secs to keep the listener engaged. Perhaps you need a singer to help you with the arrangement. Musically a good idea, with a nice chord progression.

Gilmour1978 (

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Posted: Thu 11 Sep 2008 16:55
Yeah the intro did sound long to me but couldn't work out if it was because it was missing vox or not. See how it turn out when you add them. http://www.myspace.com/mikegarvey78 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ -------------------------- You're about as useful as a one-legged man at an arse kicking contest. - Rowan Atkinson.

MarkS (

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Posted: Fri 12 Sep 2008 19:54
that intro part is also the verse isn't it? It sounds lovely hammy, bit of a shimmery La's thing going on, all the parts seem to go very well together, very tuneful, tasty. Free Download of new album - MarkIII http://www.rickymancini.co.uk/mp3/AlbumIII.zip and last 2 albums at Last.FM (free to download) http://www.last.fm/music/MrakS/+albums MarkS

hammyhamfist (

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Tayside

Posted: Mon 15 Sep 2008 22:58
Cheers guys thanx for the kind comments, not bad for a choon that was rescued out of the re-cycle bin, had 7 previous goes at trying to make it work. I'll leave it up to the singer about the intro as you all have a point and i cannot make up my mind lol, anyways hammy is chilled and having fun playing his geetar.
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